πŸ₯€ Lia Roberts πŸ„

South Lyon, MI

Hii! I like to write fantasy more than anything! Go check out my book Westland <3 Feel free to talk to me whenever :) my pg is for MA. Btw I'm not over 18! So don't assume// Bi 🌈

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Interesting Plot!

Very interesting plot, It will keep someone hooked very easy. I think there are some grammatical issues, but you can fix those if you would like. I see lot's of potential in this story, and I will continue reading. Overall this is a pretty good book :)

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Good!

I think this has a very good plot, very interesting in that area.. It just has some grammatical issues. I feel like it is hard to follow up on as well. When they were going to school, I felt as if you should have put more detail, and more of a detailed transition. Or you could have said in a new paragraph, that the characters have reached school, while in the other one you explain you transition more. Also you need longer paragraphs, your missing some full paragraphs, that's a reason it was hard to follow up on. But overall the story plot is great! and the book is nice! I will read further on.

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The plot is amazing!

I love the plot of the story overall. I read the first chapter and I can tell that I'm gonna be hooked!

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