Livvie Ray

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Beautiful way of writing

I found the way of your writing quite mesmerizing and sophisticated. And I didn't find a single error so far, but the one thing that concerns me is the plot. Perhaps it could've been because I'm kind of new is this genre and the story is still on going ,but try as I may I couldn't understand what was going on in some scenes. Aside from that, I think writing is definitely for you 💞

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Beautiful way of writing

I found the way of your writing quite mesmerizing and sophisticated. And I didn't find a single error so far, but the one thing that concerns me is the plot. Perhaps it could've been because I'm kind of new is this genre and the story is still on going ,but try as I may I couldn't understand what was going on in some scenes. Aside from that, I think writing is definitely for you 💞

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I'm hooked!

I adored the way the author started the story, it showed the character's genuine interest in an activity she feels quite passionate about. I'm already fan of xander's intensity and gentlemanly behaviour (my single ass is crying😭) . Everything about this story is perfect ,writing, plot EVERYTHING! , can't wait for next update, good job author!. 💞

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I'm loving this!

Everything about this story is perfect. I admire the characters, plot, writing style everything. The sophisticated way of writing the author used ,made me love it even more. But what I suggest the author to look upon is overusing of tags ; something which is not really necessary between conversation of two people. Other than that the story is captivating and I am ready to join the journey with calytrix ! . Good job author!

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FASCINATING !

I'm totally fascinated with the way of writing, plot , characters everything . I'll not be able to read the complete book as I have upcoming exams but I'm looking forward to read it and escape reality . And from what I gathered so far I feel like I'll be in team James , it could change for I'm not sure how every character is going to turn out. Keep doing what you're doing , writing is definitely for you!

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Compelling

I love the way you have written it, like a professional. It is like a story you read in school literature book, only better and not the sex stuff of course. It was compelling and forced me to read further and further. Keep doing what you're doing.
You should also try another genre, it would be a hit, I promise.

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I'm HOOKED!

Evelyn is the kind of woman I look up to , she is badass ,confident and a frikking BILLIONAIRE!. I love the fact that she has good taste in man and is never going to settle for less. From what I gathered from the first couple of chapters I think she's going to be WAY hard to get . And I guess I'm gonna figure that out when I binge read it tonight

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