MJ

Amazing Story

Absolutely love this author and their writing style. The vivid descriptions and ability to create the scene in the reader's head is amazing. The vocabulary used is apt and helps bring the story to life. The story flows smoothly and isn't rushed like a lot of stories. Great job Author, this is a great story you've written!

Amazing Start

I love this author's writing style. With little effort, the author has managed to introduce the characters so seemlessy while also providing great descriptions that aren't too wordy but help the reader visualize the scenes and stories beautifully. The plot is interesting and unique and I can't wait to see where this author goes from here. Amazing story Author!

Social Outcast

From what I've read so far, I think the story has a good start. The author has set up a lot of character blocks that can be built on later, which is always good. I love the cliff hanger. (It's always fun to start a story with a good ol' cliffhanger.) A critique I have would be that the some of the paragraphs are quite large and wordy, some filled with unnecessary detail. Don't get me wrong, I'm a sucker for a good description. I just think that every now and then, it wouldn't hurt to keep some things short. Good story so far Author!

Amazing Story

Full disclosure: I totally binge read this whole story until four in the morning. It was absolutely wonderful! Such a unique and intriguing story that jumps right into it. I don't think I can adequately express how great this story is. The author uses such beautiful descriptions that make me feel awe and laugh uncontrollably. This story is publishing worthy and its so goooood!!
Amazing job Author!

Good Story

I'm going to start my review with a disclaimer. I haven't read to the newest chapter, but from what I've read up to this point, I can see the potential in this story. My biggest critique about this story is the s p a c i n g. It is so important to have paragraphs and separate lines for dialogue and not just one huge paragraph for the entire chapter. Please author, it would make this story so much easier and its an easy fix. Other than that, I like the plot so far and I'm interested to see where this story goes. Good job Author!

Absolutely Amazing Story

I think I could rant for days about how beautiful this story is. The author has an amazing writing style, and manages to pull the reader into an interesting story with a great plot. As someone who doesn't usually get emotional, I found myself feeling some emotions while reading this. I'm usually a pretty harsh reviewer and have things to critique, but this story is so beautifully put together! I love the characters. I love how the story progresses at a nice pace. I. Love. This. Story. A truly incredible job Author!

Enjoyable

I haven't finished the story yet, but from what I've read I can safely say "wow". I'm going to start with one of my only critiques which is that sometimes the paragraphs can be a little large and sometimes hard to follow along and read. Don't get me wrong though, I absolutely love the detail that this author has included. The author does good about taking time and not rushing scenes/chapters which I see in a lot of stories. Love the buildup with characters and the plot is good. Great job Author!

Good story

The author does really good with their descriptions and it really helps picture the scenes. That being said, I feel like the author rushed the story a bit. Like Jase and Winter seem to have a relationship at the start of the story, despite them just meeting for the first time. I think the author should add some more scenes between the two, because they should not be as familiar with each other as they are. Besides a few grammatical errors, this story is really well written. Good job Author!

Great Start!

From what I've read so far, this story has started on an amazing start. The author includes great detail, while also not including too much. Great dialogue and an interesting main character. The start has a great plot introduced and I can't wait to see where that leads the main character. Great job author!

The Academy

From what I've read so far, I've got only good things to say. This story does good about hooking the reader and keeping them interested throughout the whole chapter. The plot is good so far, and I can imagine it will be even better as the story progresses. Very nice detail and the author did really good about not adding too much detail and therefore making the paragraphs wordy and hard to read.
Great story so far! Good job Author!