Michelle Howard

Hey there. I enjoy reading beautiful romance,mistery and thriller novels but I'm also starting to wrtite my own novel😬😁.

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Good love story

I honestly love how simple Maya is and just how reseved she is. I take her to be introverted and her character is screaming innocence. But I like how she has her way with handling situations. Her bestfriend is just everything,but I feel like she could chill a little😉but I love her personality though. Ooooooh and Aditya....I'm so existed about him.

I feel that the author should be more descriptive, just give more detail to just create a good image in the paragraph because I find myself sometimes reading and the picture isn't there because some things are just stated there without

describing exactly what's going on. The author could try painting a clear picture to make it much easier to read. There are a few gramma and punctuation issues here and there but I'm sure the author can always do proofreading and everything will be okay.
Overall I love the story and I'm curious to see how this love story turns out since I didn't read much because I only read on a few chapters.

Keep writing😊

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Broken Princess

I honestly love the story and I'm sure the author has alot planned for this book even if I just read a few chapters. Ella seems to be a really strong character and I love how she stands up for herself and just how she's surving in world without her family and the fact that her only brother is trying to kill her.
Aiden is obviously the rich business tycoon and is using the contract to keep her to himself although the terms of the contract are a little outrageous to me. It feels unrealistic to ask someone a million dollars.
I like the way the author describes everything and how it all flows beautifully,but i feel that the author could be more descriptive just to give more detail to somethings. There are a few gramma and punctuation issues here and there but I'm sure it's nothing a little proofreading can't fix.

Overall I love the story and keep writing😊

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Love it!

I honestly really love your book. It's like evey girl's dream:for your crush to finally notice you and fall head over heels inlove with you. I was honestly hooked from the start because of how you just went on and wrote this great love story. But I feel that you could've done more with Stephano though,he seemed to be words but no action. Nothing really came between the two like as in to test their relationship either than when Elizabeth was being insecure. But I honestly really love reading your novel,and I'll miss Elizabeth and Nate.

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