Merose_C

Nothing I've Read Before

(MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS ) This is an amazing story. Everything from the plot to the characters. Although having a few grammatical errors, the story is written beautifully. I love the plot line and the added parts of romance. What I love most of all is the fantasy aspect of this story. The powers, the elves, and the dragons!! How did you come up with it all? The plot just fit so perfectly with the characters and seems like a story one would see play in the movies! Every great story has room for improvement though! It may just be my preference as a reader, but I would suggest cutting down on the details. I understand that the first couple chapters are introducing the characters and setting, but I felt like there was too much detail at the beginning of the story. I also sometimes felt lost in some parts of the story, like I didn't know what was going on or who was talking to who. Also, I felt the chapters were too long! Don't get me wrong, this story had me wanting the chapters to never end, but I rather have the chapters broken up into smaller ones. This is also just a preference. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this story and can't wait for future updates! Keep up the good work!

Amazingly written

Writer has you hooked on every chapter you read. The reader constantly wants to know what happens, and that’s a skill that many other writers don’t know how to do. Your a very talented writer. I hope you continue to write this story :)