Mx4

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Fitting Justic

Well done on the story. Straight-forward, to the point and yet it still managed to express so much. You didn't hash over her sins as a character or dwell on what had led her to this punishment. Instead, you allowed the reader's familiarity with the character and the history behind her fill in the blanks for themselves and decide the tone and ultimate sadness or justness of the sentence.

Kudos to you nitefang. :)

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