Nika Dixon

Author & adventurer. Believer in living life with laughter, love and imagination.

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Very intriguing concept!

I absolutely loved the concept behind this story. The futuristic look at what a world would be like without dreaming is a great idea, and the characters were easy to like. There were some formatting issues but those would be easy to correct. The author has a great voice -- it would be nice to have more descriptions in with the dialogue so we can get more of a visual picture of what the world is like around the characters. The story flows really well, and the action moves with a great pace. The ending is a bit of a cliffhanger, but it leaves you wanting to get into the second book just to see what happens next!

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