Nishma_Subedi

Kathmandu, Nepal

My name is Nishma and I started writing when I was 9. My computer teacher was the person who helped me find out that I could write poems and stories so I am very thankful to her as well.

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Love it!

I love the plot overall and this is just so nice I want to ask you to tell me how you wrote it maybe you could share me your way of writing? It’s amazing! :)

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I don’t quiet like it

After I read the description I was really confused. It was very long and I got a little bored of it. I read the first 2 chapters and there were grammatical errors. I don’t really think I can read this further but I’ll try. Whoever finished the story I hope it was better later but till the part where I have read I don’t quiet like it.

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Weowww

Wow! Okay this is veryyyy well written, it’s amazing! I loved it. It’s really fascinating to see people like you write because you are amazing! And I really wonder how you write so wonderfully. I have to say… I envy people like you sometimes. Really great!

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Lovely

I loveeeeeeeee this story! The plot is amaziiiinnngggg!!!~ This is THE definition of the perfect Yaoi romance story!~ ITS AMAZING!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT!! can’t wait to read the next chapter! :)

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I love the story sooooooo much like it’s so cute even though the last part was kind of off it was very very nice! I love how the characters take care of each other and do what comforts each other.it was amazing. I would recommend this book to people like Andree she is my bestie. Even though the story plot grammar and all were good and the story was very engaging the writing style was a little off. I also noticed that in a part the author mistaken a characters name.

The story was cute even though the last part was kind of off it was very very nice! I love how the characters take care of each other and do what comforts each other.it was amazing. I would recommend this book to people like Andree she is my bestie. Even though the story plot grammar and all were good and the story was very engaging the writing style was a little off. I also noticed that in a part the author mistaken a characters name.

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