NonstopMatt

City Of Angels

Dear me, If you are reading this I know you have biochem homework to finish, Please finish it, I would like to graduate one day.

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I'm Astounded

Heya! What a fantastic book you have written , I'm usually not a huge fan of wolf pack style stories, but this is certainly an exception. The way you write Aria's character makes readers all see her rebelliousness and fierceness towards family. I can't believe English isn't your first language, that is something that baffled me as you seem fluent and almost like its your first, I think the plot has so much to promise and your writing style is mainstream but attractive, your grammar and punctuation could be improved by a simple check , but otherwise I think you have done an amazing job at writing this. Congrats!

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Interesting read

Fantastic story, I absolutely love the author's writing style. This story's style is very reminiscent of Phillip Pullman. One concern I have for this story is the plethoric amount of extremely advanced word's that forced me, and I study English lit, to carry a thesaurus with me the entire chapter. As much as I to find learning new words thrilling I am aware that a large quantity of readers do not wish to need a thesaurus or an extremely high vocabulary to understand the descriptive details of this story. Other than that I absolutely adore this book, and I am surprised that this hasn't blown up yet.

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Exquisite

I adore the way that the Author has written and phrased the dialogue in this novel. The poetry at the start of every chapter is a charming addition to the plot of the story. It is truly fascinating and a very lucid story, the air of mystery the author entraps in the novel is alluring. 100% recommend this book to people who enjoy cryptic books with historical origins.

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I love this story so much!

This story has an astounding beginning, i'm very surprised that this isn't that popular. really good work, I absolutely love the dialogue, you set up that characters really well. The plot is very interesting. I wish you the best of luck with the rest of the chapters, keep up the fabulous work.

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Cool

Wow good job me, I want to give you a high five for being awesome! I think you have done really well with the character creation and you have made the readers very excited to read the next part that you realease!

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