NonstopMatt

Interesting read

Fantastic story, I absolutely love the author's writing style. This story's style is very reminiscent of Phillip Pullman. One concern I have for this story is the plethoric amount of extremely advanced word's that forced me, and I study English lit, to carry a thesaurus with me the entire chapter. As much as I to find learning new words thrilling I am aware that a large quantity of readers do not wish to need a thesaurus or an extremely high vocabulary to understand the descriptive details of this story. Other than that I absolutely adore this book, and I am surprised that this hasn't blown up yet.

Exquisite

I adore the way that the Author has written and phrased the dialogue in this novel. The poetry at the start of every chapter is a charming addition to the plot of the story. It is truly fascinating and a very lucid story, the air of mystery the author entraps in the novel is alluring. 100% recommend this book to people who enjoy cryptic books with historical origins.

I love this story so much!

This story has an astounding beginning, i'm very surprised that this isn't that popular. really good work, I absolutely love the dialogue, you set up that characters really well. The plot is very interesting. I wish you the best of luck with the rest of the chapters, keep up the fabulous work.

Cool

Wow good job me, I want to give you a high five for being awesome! I think you have done really well with the character creation and you have made the readers very excited to read the next part that you realease!