

Amazing!!!
I absolutely love the story and its plot. I feel like you have an amazing talent and have a bright future withing writing if you wish to pursue it. The only tips I will leave is trying not to sound repetitive (it was a very small problem) and if I were you, I would go into the book again and put more detail into it to make it last a bit longer.
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The SASS level was through the roof! Cant wait for the next chapter! I feel like this story has great and amazing potential, so I hope you continue with it.
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This has got to be one of my favorite books of all time. I learned of it through Wattpad and binged read the entire thing. Once I found out that there were more chapters here, I hightailed it and made an account. Author, keep doing what you do because its working.
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