FavouriteChocolate

Simple, my eyes are brown and I love chocolates

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I love how you made the twins have different personalities. From my experience, my cousins act way too much like each other that I cant even identify which is which.
I can tell that you are new but I can see the effort you are putting and I say, "Carry on."
I love the book so far and i want you to keep writing. Best wishes.

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