R.K. Knightly

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Potential...

This book has potential. I wish there was more than just he erotica. I don’t feel like I got any sense of who the people were. It was mostly just sex. Granted I love sex in my books but it seemed to go from 0-100 quickly without any backstory. Reads more like erotica than romance

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Meh

The writing style was just okay. Flat one dimensional characters and no character development at all. Reid is screwing everything with a hole one day and the next he’s only screwing Lizzie. Lizzie was an unsympathetic irritating character with no backbone. The sex was pretty cliche and some of the wording used was awkward. The plot moved too fast to get to the sex scenes it seemed and I skipped through most of the sexy honestly. The end was confusing and didn’t have a good flow.

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Pretty good

Grammar was pretty bad. I liked the premise and the plot and most of the characters though page is meant to be portrayed as strong, she comes off as wishy washy and weak. Vincent was a good strong male character and spencer was never going to be he man ANYONE needs. there needs to be a smoother sewer between scenes. The plot jumps from one to another and it gets confusing. I suggest using Grammarly which is free for the grammar and just taking more time to pause between one scene and the next. Then you’d really do a bang up job!

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