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Amos

Wow, what a start to a story. I can't wait to read more. Wonderful, vivid, detailed words suck you right into this world. The word/world-building is strong, and I look forward to seeing where this author takes this story.

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Lara

I don't normally read about vampires, but this book and world sucked me in! I admit it took me a few chapters to get into the story, and the violence initially was jarring, but I think it's because this is a new genre for me. The story flowed well, and the world this author created was very vivid and written perfectly. I can't wait to read more about Lara and Gabriel.

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Mom & Mobile

Cute, short story with a good lesson for young people.

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Him

This writer wrote very few words, but they were sweet and adorable.

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Short story

I loved this sweet short story. Jeh was swoon-worthy with his love for Tia. I appreciated that they took the time to communicate and solve the misunderstanding that Moon created. So lovely :)

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Once Bytten

Wow, what a story. I was completely engaged with the story, and Ella, James, and their group of friends. It had great suspense, and the romance was slow-building and good. I have two suggestions. The first one is I could tell the writer isn't from the US, but the story takes place in the US. Certain words, mum, crisps, arse, and a few other need to be tweaked for readers to know the character are American. Secondly, I wanted Christian to get caught for arms dealing. I wanted him to pay, lol. The writer did a great job of making the reader feel hatred towards Christian. He was an ass, and I hope there is more where he gets what he deserves. Great job and wonderful story.

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How to love

I may not be the targeted audience for this story because I lived through the seventies, lol, but I really enjoyed it. This writer sucked me into the story with her vivid descriptions, and I felt like I got a good feel for not only the characters but also the town. I definitely can't wait to see what happens between H and h and their group of friends. I will be waiting for more of this story. I loved the music references!

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Diamond

This writer has created a world in which I want to know more about. I can't wait to read more of this story and see what happens when the Goddess of the Diamonds awakens to see that she has been rescued.

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Poetry

I really enjoyed the short poems. They were heartfelt and meaningful. Keep writing. You have a lot of talent. I felt your emotions with each poem.

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Knowledge

I loved this! I can not wait to find out how things go for the charmed friends, Harlan, Sophie, and Allegra. This story gripped me from the beginning, and I thought it was well written, and the descritions were fabulous. Looking forward to continuing with the story.

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Bad Blood

I really enjoyed this. I'm a sucker for a strong heroine and look forward to reading what come next. I thought the writing was strong and I connected with all of the characters.

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Coral

I enjoyed the world created, and I think this author has a lot of promise. I look forward to more. I think once this gets edited and the grammar errors are corrected it will be even more enjoyable then what it already is. I can't wait to read more.

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