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A great example of buildup and payoff
How far will love, or is it craziness - are they the same thing, take you? Is it just paranoia or is someone really after Nathan? This story is a great example of a great buildup and payoff. Criticism: This is a personal preference thing but I would love to see a deeper dive into Nathan's emotional state and his sense of fear. Great job with the story!
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