Samuel Garbett

Leeds

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A great opening.

I'm a few chapters in and I'd like to say, without a doubt, the opening is fantastic.

From the short prologue through to believable dialogue and intriguing, colourful terms to describe this fantastical world, I was anticipating and anxious to see the next development.

I love the idea and plot line so far and can't wait to read on.

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I'd consider myself hooked.

I love the style.
I love the setting.
I love the atmosphere.

You've tapped into something fantastic here, from the clearly invested-in characters down to the language used to portray the genre perfectly.

I'd consider myself hooked.

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