Samuel Garbett

A great opening.

I'm a few chapters in and I'd like to say, without a doubt, the opening is fantastic. From the short prologue through to believable dialogue and intriguing, colourful terms to describe this fantastical world, I was anticipating and anxious to see the next development. I love the idea and plot line so far and can't wait to read on.

I'd consider myself hooked.

I love the style. I love the setting. I love the atmosphere. You've tapped into something fantastic here, from the clearly invested-in characters down to the language used to portray the genre perfectly. I'd consider myself hooked.