Sandicat

Warning

FYI, if you want to finish this book, you will need to purchase it. We should be told this upfront, not till you get to the last chapter that is here.

Very hard to read.

This could be an interesting story to read, how ever, the punctuation, the jumping around from character to character without any idea of who is talking just leaves me confused and lost in the story. I've tried several times to read it, but I have given up. Good luck to the author, but maybe she should take a writing class or maybe have someone edit her stories.

Many errors

There is a constant mix up of names. Reading is very confusing, because the author is always jumping from one person to another without any kind of indication of who is talking, and there isn't any punctuation. I'm a terrible speller, but I love to read, so I'm always seeing common misspelling of words that a regular spell check will not catch. The usual there, their and they're, kind of thing. There seems to be large gaps in the the plot line, however I'm only up to Chapter 7 and there is still a chance some of them might be explained as the story goes on, if I can manage to keep reading. There are programs out there that can help, not only with spelling but with punctuation and content. I will continue on with reading this story until the mix ups get to be too much for my brain to work around. and I hope it gets better.

only kind of interesting

I won't know if it gets better, it's gone, lol, but I kept thinking for a 24-year-old, she is really immature.