Halli Shyanne Smith

Centreville, MI

I’m an amateur Writer who is writing about my experiences and my feelings. I hope you enjoy them.

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3/5 Not that bad

Your style is definitely unique. I personally would like more description on each charachter personality. I do enjoy that you want the readers to create thier own view of what they look like and it's a bit refreshing in a sense. If you like I could help you with your grammar issues, I would have no problem with that. It has decent potential that's for sure. :) Have a wonderful day!!!! And feel free to check out my book The Lost Witch.

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Love it!!!!!

Absolutely love this series. Fantasy books are my drug. Lol.

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