Rosalie_Josie

☕Stressed, blessed and coffee obsessed☕

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Beautiful!

This book is such a page-turner! I got hooked right from the first chapter and was at the edge of my seat the entire time. Your vivid and realistic descriptions of Edith's emotions granted life to her, especially the part where you described her indecisiveness and anxiousness about Joanna. Stunning scene!

I loved how your narrative flowed, so smooth and effortless, and it showed how much the writer was connected to the characters that he could grasp her emotions, her feelings, her internal conflicts so realistically.

Your poetic wording was so breathtakingly beautiful; it made me gasp. I don't think I am capable of pointing out any grammar or punctuation errors because it was spot on!

Amazing work! Hope to read more from you in the near future.

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That's quite an improvement there

So far, I think, I find this story exciting and a page-turner; I got hooked right from the first chapter and was intrigued to know what was about to happen next. Your vivid and realistic descriptions granted life to the protagonist, and I no longer saw her as a fictional character. You have got the skill to grasp your characters emotions, thoughts and feelings so realistically that readers can easily fit themselves in the mc’s shoes. The immediate and convincing actions in the first paragraph hooked me to the next, then one after the other.
Something that you could improve about your story is the summary. Summaries are essential; through reading it, a reader will decide whether they should read the book or not. But the problem in your resume is the overuse of ellipsis. I suggest writing a detailed description of what your book is about or just write down a specific scene from the book that you think the readers will find interesting.
Other than that, it was a great book with well-rounded characters and excellent description and details. Fantastic work, Author! I loved this book.

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Underated

As I have mentioned before, I am a slacker but this story was just so interesting that it got me hooked right from the first chapter and I couldn't stop turning the pages. Even though horror stories are not my usual read but this book was something I would have regretted if I hadn't read it. Either it was because of the mysterious setting of the story or your amazing way of portraying it.
I loved how your narrative flowed, so smooth and effortless like a stream of consciousness and it showed how much the writer was connected to the characters that he could grasp his emotions, his sufferings, his internal conflicts so realistically. I was amazed by the graphic details of the scenes, you definitely have your way of stringing words together in the most beautiful way. The suspense was well maintained throughout the story and now I am dying to know who was "him" who has not been named and what was his connection with the main character.
There were few editing issues like rewriting the same word, missing out alphabets, but they were simply too minor to take a star away. Great job! I can't wait to read more! Like seriously, you have to update!

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Interesting!

I didn't see that coming! Wow, what an amazing story! Glad that I found it, I was so hooked that I read the whole story without any breaks in between (which is rare). I must say. Few grammatical issues which was already mentioned by others, so no point in bringing it up again. Overall, it was a great read.

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Stunning!

Oh, Jesus, I can't wait to finish this book already! Amazing plot with well-rounded characters; this is the book that I would save in my reading list even when I'm done reading it. I am still not done reading the whole but I just paused to compliment the writer for her unique approach to muted people. You were not constantly reminding the readers that Destiny was mute, rather you fleshed out her thoughts and emotions like a normal person. Loved it!
Other than that, the scenes flowed smoothly which shows it was planned and edited well. The suspense and the action in this book. were insane, so immersive, I could feel myself being sucked into the computer screen.
Amazing work, dear! I would love to continue this book until the very last word.

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Brilliant!

A friend recommended me this book a few days ago, and I am glad that she did. Your style is so immersive, I could feel myself being sucked into the computer screen for the past two days. Structuring the entire book in a journal format is quite an unique and rare-found idea, but it did benefit the story by preserving the terrific mystery and the horrifying thriller till the last word of the book.
It's amazing to see how you are capable of giving Utterson and Marwin's journal a different writing style; and all the characters held a different attitude and a contrasting belief system. I was at the edge of my seat the whole time, accusing and doubting all the characters throughout the process, not having even a speck of clue about who's the real killer.
I don't think I am capable of pointing out any grammar or punctuation errors, because it was spot on! It was genuinely a nerve-wracking read, but I loved it to bits!
Mind-boggling work!

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Just one more chapter!

This book is such a page-turner! Normally, I keep on commenting on the chapters while I am reading just to inform the writer that I have started reading their work. But this book blinded me from seeing anything else than the words. And I loved how you didn't waste much time and chapters introducing the characters and setting the atmosphere, you just jumped right into it from the first chapter. The realistic and genuine descriptions and details of the characters have done an excellent job in bringing them to life.
In short, I just loved this (still not over yet) and have learned a lot! Great work!

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Promising plot

Attention - Dear readers, please don’t listen to those two fu*kers up there blaming the writer for plagiarizing someone else's work. It’s not true at all! I have read both of the stories and can tell they draw nothing common (except the characters are both nerds, which is a characteristic, not the main theme/plot of the book). Think before you blame someone for plagiarizing. The writer had poured her heart and soul to write this book. You have no right to blame her, a**holes.

Coming to the review, as a new writer, you have done an excellent job in maintaining the structure of the story without drifting away much from the plot. The story was beautiful and heartwarming, and the characters are well rounded, which is something I truly love about this book. Good work!

Now the nit-picky stuff.
The plot is a bit too feminine, you know what I mean? It's not a big problem but I would at least want the male characters to act like a man. They do not have to be strong or masculine but their way of speaking and reacting to certain staff should be like a male.

Your characters are great and funny, especially the protagonist. Her battles with her thoughts were hilarious and genuine, but it’s a bit too long. I mean, readers don't like reading an entire paragraph based on just The character’s thoughts. They can get a little bored and can end up skimming through the paragraphs without reading them.

Coming In a short conclusion, the story is great but it needs a final touch. Just keep on reading and writing, and you’ll soon get better.

Good work!

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Intrigued!

This is such a page-turner! I truly admire your writing style and technique; the way you give short yet concise descriptions and details, adequate enough to get us familiar with the atmosphere you’ve created in the book. The strong and immediate actions in the first chapter hooked to the next, then the other.
The realistic and genuine dialogues have done an excellent job in pulling the characters to life. I don't think I can complain about anything in this book, you are such a talented writer. Please continue this book, I am intrigued to read more chapters.
Great work!

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Intrigued

This is such a page-turner! Genuinely in love with your writing style; your short yet concise descriptions about the characters and the scenes drove my senses and imagination to the world you’ve created in this book. I love how you give out just enough information for your readers to leave them thrilled, not confused. The distinctive voice of Gavin, Pierce and Miles and the share of the realistic dialogues between them have done an excellent job in bringing the characters to life. I truly am in love with this book. Like seriously, you have to update! I want to know who’s the killer! Is he really the night stalker or a copycat? I am dying to know!
Mind-boggling work!

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Good start!

The simplicity and softness of this love story is beautiful. I see you don't have any other stories on Inkitt so this must be your first one. Honestly, I would say you have done a great job in making the writing as smooth as possible. Keep practicing and you'll soon get there. Good luck, dear❤️😊

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Impressive

So, where should I start?
Ness is a book I can't still pin down the plot of. Not in a bad way, you definitely have got a unique and interesting storyline there which definitely got me hooked from the very first chapter. The vivid and sharp descriptions and details were just enough to drive our senses and imagination to the world you’ve created in this book. It's amazing to see how you did that so effortlessly and smoothly which just shows how much of a talented writer you are. You have done an excellent job in making the dialogues as realistic and genuine as possible - something I genuinely admire about your writing.
Coming to a short conclusion, I love this book and would love to read on as you upload more. Great work!

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Thrilled

Not that I can speak from experience, but you've got an exceptional writing style and technique which I've been trying to develop for years now. You give out short yet concise descriptions and details which is just enough to drive our senses and imagination to the world you've created. The realistic reactions and genuine dialogues have done an excellent job in bringing the characters to life. I don't think I can complain about anything about this book, except that it's an ongoing one, so I have to wait till you upload more chapters! I am dying in here with curiosity, seriously, you have to update! I'm in love with this book already.
Thanks for sharing this book with us!
Mind-boggling work!

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Vivid description

I genuinely love the plot of this book already. The beautiful setting, well-rounded characters, amazing word choice- truly got me hooked. And I will look forward to reading more chapters once they come out. Good work!

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Beautiful

What is happiness?
Researchers have yet to pin down the definition or an agreed-upon framework for happiness. With so many takes on happiness, it’s no wonder that happiness is a little difficult to define scientifically, The meaning of Happiness really depends on who you ask. If you ask me what is happiness, I would say, it's the feeling I get when I see a gorgeous smile on the faces of my loved ones, the feeling I get when I write the first draft of my story, the feeling I get when people compliment my work, the feeling I get when I cocoon myself in my parent's arms.
In general, it means that you are pleased with yourself and your choices, and with the person that you are.
Thank you for writing this beautiful piece! I loved it!

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Intrigued!

This is beautifully written. Your summary had me hooked, and I don't at all regret spending my break hours reading this book. The way you described everything makes me feel like I was present in that world. And, that's a rare skill only a few authors can achieve.
A unique plot, great characters, beautiful setting and a tiny sprinkle of humour on top of it- all in all, I just loved it!
It was a great read and a change of pace for me.

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Great start!

I loved this story, mainly because of the way you portrayed your characters and brought them to life. It's fine to not be grammatically perfect because no one is perfect. We all are here to learn, so I would say you did a pretty decent job as a new writer. And, I would love to read more from you :)

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Blood & Curses

I owed you this review for a long time now so here it is.
The story was unique and it had me on the edge of my seat right from the beginning. I especially loved how your narrative flows so smoothly and effortless, without showing too much or too little descriptions. You didn't bog us down with character or scene descriptions but rather spread it throughout the story which is a skill only a few authors have. I congratulate you for achieving this.
As a reader, I can say that this book didn't bore me at all. I am not a fan of vampire stories but this one had me hooked because of the realistic description of your characters, the refreshing story and your wonderful way of conveying it.
Great work, Author:)

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Needs to be out there!

So far, this is one of the best stories I have ever read on Inkitt and there are plenty of reasons to say that this story deserves to be in the spotlight.
First is your writing technique - the narrative was entirely from Ray’s perspective, and you did a fabulous job in achieving the tone of a detective. You were so into the fictional character that I could literally hear Ray speaking his dialogues in my head.
The scenes were not forced, it just drifted around with Ray’s thoughts so smoothly and effortlessly that it felt like he was the one writing the story. You gave not too much or too little details but just a decent amount of information that a detective would have given while surveying a scene.
For now, you just have six chapters of the book, but I am shelving it with the hope to keep up with your updates.
I absolutely can’t wait to finish this book.
Great work, Author!

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Amazing!

I am in love with book and I have reasons to say this book is amazing- first is the character development. The way you described each character, giving us a picturesque visual of them and showing us how they behave and act in certain situations, truly amazing! Second is your writing style- Through your writing I could easily connect with their feelings and their emotions. I was hooked in the very first chapter and it didn’t take me long to finish up to this because of how interesting it was. Waiting to read more from you, mate. Keep writing!

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Lovely story

I really love to read this kind of story- You have an amazing way of writing which captivated me. The plot was good, the characters were well described, it’s just need to get polished by an editor. Overall, lovely story. Keep writing, mate❤️

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Intrigued

After reading this so far, I wanna tell you that you have got an exceptionally thrilling plot- I am quite excited to know what's about to happen in Seraphin’s life and who’s that stranger.
The reason I gave it a four-star is because of the time-lapses you used in this story. We see timelapse in movies or books just once or maybe twice, more than that is a bit odd I guess.
What I loved about this story the most is your writing style and the one you describe characters. No grammatical mistakes that I have noticed so far, so you have got a 5 for that. This book is intriguing and I would love to read more. So keep writing, mate! ❤️

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Fascinating

Omg! This book is incredible, I started it in the morning and now it's 9;46 pm, it had me hooked for only God knows how many hours. The characters are well developed and the distinctive voice of each of them captivated me. But I still can't get enough of it, I wanna read more. You are an amazing writer, mate. Would love to read more from you. Oh! I just got to know that you are gonna self publish your book. Great decision! Your books deserve to be out there! Good luck with your future, love.

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