Sky Angel

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Amazing

I simply love it! I've read a lot of books, but yours is just amazing. You know how to build up excitement for your readers and your writing style is really good, keep up the good work

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Characters development

After reading some chapters, so far this is all I've got to say.

It has a good story but the characters are not so good. They sound so unreal and I think that's because you didn't develop the characters well but with a few editing I'm sure you could get that fixed.
Great story, really do like it.

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Intense...

I really like the story. Aiden is going through a lot and I wish something good will happen to him and Ash can go rot in hell! There are some few grammatical mistakes we all authors make bit I think the story's great!

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Love it!

I love it. The plot is intriguing and it resembles that of Cinderella, which I love by the way. Aside from the few punctuation errors and misspellings, the story is actually good. I'm hooked already and would love to read more

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Love it

I really love werewolf and vampire novels so I fell in love with this one straight away. It's really good and even though you said English wasn't your first language, your writing style and punctuations are very good.
Great work it is.

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It could be better

I love the plot, it's really great.
But the grammar and writing style is not very good. But don't worry, with a little bit work on editing, all will be good. Some tips for the grammar, learn to use pronouns. Instead of using 'Aria' every time, you can use 'she'. This is very important.
Also, you should be careful with what pov you use. In the first chapter, you used a third person pov, then the rest you use first person pov. When writing a novel, you have to stick to one. You either use a one person pov or a third person pov.
But I still liked the novel, it's really good. Just work on what I said and all will be well.
Great work.

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