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Well written; Compelling
The author of this story has well described the thoughts and feelings experienced by one so deeply unhappy within their own skin. This piece is beautifully written, in both a grammatical and a lyrical sense. I cannot wait for the next instalment, to see where the author goes with this premise. Based on the story thus far, it will be compelling!
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