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To be honest, I really enjoy everything I have read so far. The way you write is really well done and captures the reader quite nicely in this 3rd-person style of writing, almost makes me envious as I've tried to do this technique but it still needs work. Even the information you've placed into it isn't a huge overload. As for recommendations, I've got a good handful that I'm sharing this to.

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