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Shattering Shadows

The storyline is great and works well. I really enjoyed it. You developed your characters and their relationship very well. The only thing I would say is shy away from the exposition. The character descriptions would fit much better if you sprinkle a little here and a little there. And some may not have anything to do with the story. But I enjoyed the story very much, Thank you.

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