The over all idea of this was wonderful, and drew me in. Now I'm over here thinking about how Dudley Dursley could have had a magical child, which would be a really interesting area.
However, in some of the parts, grammar was a little off; it didn't take away too much, just something I noticed. For example, when ending a quote, it would usually be something like, "Hi," rather than simply "Hi". But the characters, especially Dudley, were very on point. Though I do feel like Ginny would be a tad bit insulting to Harry, haha. But it was still a very good fic. I enjoyed it.
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