Sugasluv

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Promising start

What a heartbreaking plot you've come up with, especially for ARMY! I must say I can't wait to find out what you have in store. It's a bit early in the story with only one chapter in to judge the plot but your intro drew me in like a moth to a flame.

My advice is to watch your grammar so even the grammar Nazis can't complain. I use Grammarly to help me, you should try it.

Keep going, it's good!

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Purely Magical!

I'm so glad I found your book. You are gifted writers. The story is so well described and the intricate plot is fascinating. The only improvement I would make is a better cover. Once a reader gets a taste of your writing they will hunger for more!

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Great start!

I'm enjoying your story so far. Even though you jump from one character's pov to another, it hasn't been hard to follow. Also, the dialogue between the characters is engaging and natural.

The cover is amazing and it's what drew me in to read your book. Love can feel like a burn so that is a beautiful way to visualize it.

Please continue.

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Magical!

I truly enjoyed your story.

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Preserved In Ink

An escape into the daily toil of a teen's life as seen through her love-sick mind as she tries to write to her crush. The writing style is original and humorous showing the character's emotions that feel familiar and go straight to the heart.

With only 4 chapters in, the plot of this story seems like a slow burn that will culminate when the mc reveals her feelings to her crush. What makes the story lovely is that we get to experience the angst and obstacles that get in the way. As in real life, things don't always work out how we wish, but the feeling of being in love is still worth all the pain and sometimes it is preserved in ink. (ಥ _ ಥ)

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His Sex Doll

I really liked how the story progressed. I can tell the writer put effort into making this hot, hot, hot! The plot flows well and the characters are interesting making you want to read more. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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