Sydney knight

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It's great

Actually, i haven't read the whole story but i couldn't stop myself from writing this review. I haven't read a billionaire story with a king yet and i would say as my first experiemce this story meets up to my all expextations. Keep on writing because i am sure we all will love your stories. Only you need to correct grammer and punctuation mistakes which i am sure can be easily done with more editing and more concentration. As an author myself, i know that no one can have perfection in writing. There's always a mistake... though i really love the story.

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More and more romance!!

I really really like the romance. Especially how Em.J feels when she meets Dean. That hand-shake was.... wow
I can't wait to see how their romance develops and they become each other support. Amazing story. I just love it!! ❤

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Love it

The story is different and i like it. ❤

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Amazing start

I can't wait to read next. I am fascinated by CeCe strong will and yeah she should of course show Brenton he couldn't always do as he wishes to. But there are some grammer mistakes and some sentence structures lacks fluency. This can however be easily corrected with more editing.
LOVE IT!!

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Love the story

Can't wait to read more. ❤

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Fantastic story

The book is amazing and i can't wait to read until the end. You just have to improve on grammer and sentence fluency. But I must say i love their romance. Like initially they pretended to not know each other and then all of a sudden they just did it.... ❤

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Blood moon

Actually when i read the initial chapters i was reminded of Edward, except Edward is nothing like Aiden. I would say that your story is unique and like a new breath among other supernatural stories. I wish you would update soon, for i want to know what happens next. As for the grammer and writing style, it is good, but with more improvement, it will get better.

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