TKSweeney

Great Potential…not quite there yet.

The book has potential but there are a LOT of spelling and syntax errors. There’s also a lot of either skipping around or forgetting to write parts of the storyline yo create a better literary flow, non explanations of how or why an action is occurring and no sensible buildup to a characters actions which all combined to make the book hard to enjoy. Additionally, a large portion of the language used, especially the sexual language, is not factually accurate for the viking raids time period. At any rate, I thank you for writing and for asking for my input.

Good so far

I haven’t read enough to provide a fair assessment of the plot but so far the writing is good. Thank you

Kind of all over the place.

I am trying to give this book a chance but it’s getting more confusing and convoluted as it goes on. I’ll read a bit more but I don’t think I’m going to make it all of the way to the end. It’s quite a headache trying to understand.

Waste of time and COMPLETELY unrealistic EVEN for a fantasy.

Makes NO sense. Way too many varying plot lines. How is the owner killed off by his workers? Why is he the owner one minute then just a lowly test subject the next? Wish I could get the hours of my life back after reading this crap.

Great Story!

I loved the characters and the extremely descriptive words used to describe them so that I could imagine them in my minds eye. Looking forward to more of this story!