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The Scent of Jade

Scent of Jade This is a subscription story, so my review only covers the free chapters. A couple of things first: what attracted me first was the cover. It's subtle compared to most of the garish covers of this genre popular in Inkitt. It's an ABO story, which I normally hate, but I didn't hate this one. I'm not sure how I feel about the writer's style. It is clear cut, precise like a knife, zero flowery prose, great use of an impressive vocabulary. Even visually, as I read it on my computer screen, it is sharp, single words in a row. The characters are described more by behaviour and dialogue, rather than appearance. There is none of the usual waffling on about the Omega being beautiful, delicate and soft, or the Alpha being a brute. The author describes THEM by their words and actions. At times, I felt like I was reading a textbook; there is little to no emotion in the writing. I am not sure if that is because the author wants to highlight the restraint the characters have to use to keep themselves under control, or if it is simply their writing style. The story is cold, but not uninteresting, otherwise I would have dropped it after the first chapter. I'm not sure what to make of this story. I would like to read more, but I'm not in subscribing. But if you are, I recommend this book. It's a completely different take on ABO stories. Even after a few chapters, I am rooting for the main characters, which means that the author has won me over. Smithy

From Hate to Love

The novel is simply written, with enough detail to keep the story going. What keeps the reader turning the pages are the characters. Armin goes from a shallow, fickle boy to a strong young man, all thanks to Kristof, who is a good guy from beginning to end. There's enough drama and villains to keep things interesting. But the end is too abrupt for my taste, in my opinion. Even with an epilogue and an extra chapter if feels like a bit of a cop-out ending. I also wouldn't tag it as erotic or erotic romance. The sex scenes are fine, but far from erotic. All in all, it is a good binge read over a weekend and lots of snacks.

The Mute Concubine and the Northern Prince

The Mute Concubine and The Northern Prince, by Zhonra. If you like Chinese BL historical novels, this is one of the better ones. It's an excellent read, binge-worthy. There are some lovely passages throughout. The two main characters develop slowly, eventually finding balance. Both of them were damaged souls when they met. Yuren was frustratingly weak and helpless, and Zhaoyang knew nothing except how to take and control. The story moves at a leisurely pace, and it's not too long. I recommend it. Smithy

When Wolves Claim

When Wolves Claim isn't your typical werewolf story. The plot shows the ugly side of the mating bond and maintaining pack traditions. The main character, Micah, a human, finds himself pulled into the supernatural world against his will. It's well written, and the characters remain consistent throughout. Unlike most werewolf stories, there is no dramatic change in personality or attitude. Mpeg is not a favourite were trope of mine, but it's done reasonably well in this story.

The Rejected Alpha

Although this book is a good read, with characters and a plot that keep the reader interested, it is incomplete. and I can't see it ever being finished. I've tried reading it on two writers' platforms, and both times it stalls around Chapter 30. It would be nice to see it finished.

The Cursed Orchid

I don't have much time to read, and I'm picky about what I read. Novels have to catch my attention straight away and hold it. This story does that. A chapter or two of this novel is like a banquet. If you're limited to reading for a short while, it fills you up. I'm impressed with the poetic style of the author. The workings of Wei Xian's mind and the backdrop of the fortress are beautifully described. I suggest trying this novel, you'll find yourself involved before you know it. Smithy.

HOW Unfortunate

I'm new to Inkitt and this is the first story I've read here. Hope this review is helpful. Firstly, I was attracted to the story by the cover. So you get points for that. It's not a genre I usually read. When I started reading Love Ya Sis, I had no expectations. Once I started reading it held my attention. Halfway through I had to know how it ended. Although I couldn't visualize the sisters (more description of their appearance would be appreciated), I heard their voices clearly. The Narrator is right, they are both annoying. It was easy to read and constructed well. The Author didn't drown the reader with useless details and did a good job of slowly building the tension. You know there will be a twist but you don't know which way it will go....until it happens. I was dreading a Stephen King ending but I was pleasantly surprised. The ending was neat and tidy, with no loose ends. With horror, you don't have to explain everything anyway. The Narrator's comments are a nice touch. I'm curious where you are going to take "Taste". Only one chapter is posted and you've successfully made me feel irked. I foresee something gross.