TheSexyBrain

Strong Characters

Sorry, it took me a while to get to your story but alas I had time to read your first chapter. I think you did a good job with the characters. Descriptions were good and the mood was set effortlessly. Great job on that. Technical writing needs work and will need to be addressed when you edit. Good job on the story, though.

Interesting

The idea for this story is intriguing. It is yet to early to know where it will go from here as it only has 2 chapters but the author shows to have a great imagination, so I hope it to be an interesting read.

Interesting and Different

This story is in its beginning stages but it holds lots of promise. One gets engrossed in the characters and the situation. Cast out, bullied, different... We always love for an underdog to win and I can't wait to see how it happens in this book.

Humorous

I loved reading this poem. It was funny and clever.. The style is old school and well done. I laughed aloud a few times, especially in Parte 2. Lovely!!

Living with the Dead

Reading through these experiences was fantastic. I love paranormal "stuff" and this book did not disappoint as they were real encounters experienced by the author and her family. I recommend anyone and everyone who is interested in ghosts, spirits, entities, and the likes to read it and get spooked.