TheSexyBrain

Somewhere in Texas

In 2017 I started writing again after discovering Wattpad. I like different genres & add romance/mature scenes to my books. I dream to write a book that is made into a movie or a TV series someday.

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Great Idea

I love murder mysteries and as of now, all fingers point to the obvious person (who I think did not do it, of course), the boyfriend, which is great. I haven't finished it but we'll see what happens next. The book is in its very early stages of proofreading and it is missing words, has typos, and needs the paragraphs to be restructured for smooth reading. I still think the idea is a good one. Who doesn't love a murder mystery?

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Humorous

I loved reading this poem. It was funny and clever.. The style is old school and well done. I laughed aloud a few times, especially in Parte 2. Lovely!!

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Living with the Dead

Reading through these experiences was fantastic. I love paranormal "stuff" and this book did not disappoint as they were real encounters experienced by the author and her family. I recommend anyone and everyone who is interested in ghosts, spirits, entities, and the likes to read it and get spooked.

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Originally Creepy

The author does a good job to spook us and has an original twist in every story. This would be a great book to read around Halloween with a bunch of friends. It's fun and creepy. I really enjoyed it.

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Fun and to the Point

If you are looking for a swift erotic read, stop right there. You've reached the right book.!

The author writes from an honest male perspective. To me, that is very refreshing, as most of these types of stories/erotica are written from a female point of view.

The book needs to be edited in its entirety but that shouldn't stop readers, especially erotica lovers, from checking it out. The author wishes to move the reader with the scenes and excite them and getting to the point where the author is guiding them to go should not be difficult.

Good job and keep on writing!

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Interesting

I am not finished with this book yet but based on the chapters I read, I think it is a well thought out storyline. The author's writing style is good and because it has a medieval flair to it it is very interesting and entertaining.

I think punctuation needs work and the paragraph breaks do too. The way they are set now disrupts the flow of the story but don't let that stop you, Those are small items a good editor can take care of.
I recommend you give this book and author a read.

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