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Asylum

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Summary

A birthday ghost-hunt turned wrong. Liz has a second thoughts and a bad feeling about her best friend celebrating his birthday at an abandoned, ghost-infested Asylum but her friends insist she must celebrate with them. Things get complicated after they enter the dilapidated building and the situation turns for the worse. Will, any of them make it out alive? Or will they perish seeking an avoidable thrill?

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
6
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Introduction


Welcome.

This is a first attempt at writing a thriller/horror genre book. I welcome constructive criticism and comments to improve in this style. Please give it a like, add it to your reading list, comment, and/or leave a review.

With much appreciation, BVS, aka, The Sage Quill

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Really, this plot sounds ingenious ,I am so looking forward to this. and good luck on the contest, you should be giving them a run for their money 

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