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A birthday ghost-hunt turned wrong. Liz has a second thoughts and a bad feeling about her best friend celebrating his birthday at an abandoned, ghost-infested Asylum but her friends insist she must celebrate with them. Things get complicated after they enter the dilapidated building and the situation turns for the worse. Will, any of them make it out alive? Or will they perish seeking an avoidable thrill?
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This is a first attempt at writing a thriller/horror genre book. I welcome constructive criticism and comments to improve in this style. Please give it a like, add it to your reading list, comment, and/or leave a review.
With much appreciation, BVS, aka, The Sage Quill
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Marie: Truly enjoyable and some great laughs ... can I get adopted by this family !
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Lily: The story is incredibly good, every story from you is amazing.
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mmslanker: Bound to kill was a fun read. I really liked the plot, but it did start to feel like it was rushed and hopping around towards the middle to the end.There were a couple of red herrings and surprises that made the story more interesting, and I enjoyed the inclusion of multiple supernatural species and...
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Elisa_sims: Your characters are incredibly memorable. I'd enjoy hearing more about how you developed them
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T: I was totally engrossed in this from the start the writing drew me in , typical Nina style, the two main characters were perfect for for each other, loved hoe strong Bryce was and Rory no matter how strong & dangerous he was he took a crap load of beatings from her but never really retaliated. I sta...
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anabeth2012: so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Really, this plot sounds ingenious ,I am so looking forward to this. and good luck on the contest, you should be giving them a run for their money