Vaila
@Vaila
Hey huns! Thanks for checking out my profile. Feel free to have a read of my work, or just leave me a message! Much love!!
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Good but too short.
Good story.... but it ends too quickly, and at the end it refers you to a story that doesn't exist.... which is a bit disappointing. It stops right when it's getting to the good part.
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I would love it more if there were more to read....
Really enjoying this so far. Loving the world you’ve built and I can’t wait to read more!
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