ViolaFike

The Deceiving Realm

Basically, I like to write stories with a variety of genres with complex plotlines. Violence and drama are my forte. Romance and slice of life are something I need to work on.

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Can't wait for more!

This is the first LGBT story I've read, so it was a nice yet tragic experience for me. The backstory and characterization between Minjae and Sehyun were beautifully done. I can see the comparison and contrast in the two of them, and personally I find them quite the cute couple. The writing style is quite interesting as I have not yet seen such writing, but it was simple, even if it can be slightly off-sounding (to me). Some parts of the story could use proper grammar and punctuation, but overall it did not hinder me from my enjoyment. It was a ride of both happiness and tears for me. I just didn't want to believe that the relationship between Minjae and Sehyun has been tainted with so horribly. I feel bad for them. Anyways, I can't wait for more!

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