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I really do think that this is quite a masterpiece. I've always been impressed by writers who could invent a whole new universe, and you've done just that. Your writing style is magnificent, and I would love to read more of your stories. This has given me an inspiration for a book I wanted to write, and I thank you for that. I am in awe of your work, and I can't wait to see what else you come up with. I also would like to know if you'd be interested in collaborating... I live for this kind of story, and I think this makes a wonderful prologue or beginning. If you wish to contact me, you can message me at . I really hope we can at least try to work together, and if not I wish you luck!

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