Wamakai

Very Nice

I found this story by accident and thought I'd give it a read. It's the first thing I've opened and the last thing I've read for the last three or four days (I have to work some of that time too). I like the story. I like how it went. The plot is good and overall, yes I would give you four whole stars. You do have some problems with grammar and spelling which you might need to work on. Otherwise, this was fun. That cliff-hanger though...

Anyway, thanks for the story and happy writing! :)

PS: Added an extra star since you're so awesome ;)

This was... wow!

I wasn't expecting to learn something but I did. Because I often face this same problem myself, the story spoke to me personally. I was very happy to find such a story, short as it is. I really liked it and I hope to see more just like it. This is a very good bit of writing with a lesson I think everyone can understand. Thank you so much for writing. You have a new fan :)

This is really good!

I really liked the story. I smiled a lot through it. Ezra and Brendan are absolutely adorable! I'm glad I took the time to read it. Overall I liked the story. The grammar needs some work but otherwise, very well done!

Not bad

It's an interesting story. I would like to read more. However, I did find it a little difficult to follow in places. You need to work on the story progression, the intervals and your grammar. Otherwise, this was a really good effort. Hope to be reading more from you soon!

Pretty Good

Very interesting read so far. The synopsis caught my attention but the plot is keeping me hooked. There are grammar issues but they can be ignored. Looking forward to reading more.

Wow...!

The story's great. I didn't know what to expect especially with the intro but it drew me in and here we are. There are a few grammatical issues here and there but the plot is good enough that I can ignore it. Well done author!

This is pretty awesome!

I first read this as one of those personalised stories, then I lost the link and forgot the name but I thought I should really find it again. I did and I love it! I'm only in Chapter 4 but I'm pretty blown away by it. I really can't wait to read the rest. Great job!