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Love this story!
I am so into this story! One of my favorites! Very publish worthy! I would buy it! Please keep up the good work by updating soon!!!
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Cool unique story. I was actually crying for the bad guy. Even tho he got what he deserved I'm glad she got closure.
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Shes too young for him...statutory!
Shes too young for him...she should be an 18yr old at least
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Goood story!
I wish he was still sweet and doting instead of cruel and half crazy!
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Abandoned?
Is this an abandoned story? I loved it, would have even waited for a publication in print! Please come back to writing this author!
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