WilliamHTB

First introduction into dark romance and I like it.

I really enjoyed the budding friendship between Mora and Petal, along with the dialogue between all of the characters. The poetic but not too flowery descriptions of the scenery and setting I rather enjoyed. There is definitely a mystery as to who the head of the manor is that is being set up well. What caught my eye was certainly the cover for the book, you did an outstanding job in my opinion with that. The only complaint I might have, but it is a minor one, is some issues with the grammar, punctuation, typos. But that's the only complaint and those can be fixed easily and as it is now, they do not distract too much from the plot. Overall, I enjoyed it and hope to see more in the future.