Yrsa

a girl with too many stories on her mind. I enjoy writing, doing meh graphic designs and overthinking, welcome to the club and don't forget to share some love 💜

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GOOD READ

I have finally had the time to read your story and I'm really glad I did. This is a deep one, with content that could be either triggering or offensive to readers so I'm glad you sat a warning out there for them. I think I have my fair share of alpha meets mate and turn soft but as your story is still in its premises, I'm so willing to wait for the next chapters and just discover more of your world and the characters you have built along with their backstories. You have a great writing style, your descriptions are good and they flow really nicely. You put really your heart into details and it shows and brings quality to your work and I can only congratulate you on that. Really hope you will continue uploading and that you will use this sensitive theme to a good use, as in raising awareness!

Hope you the best and stay safe!

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IMPRESSED

So, to be honest, I'm more of a fantasy book reader so I was quite pushing the moment I would go and read this one despite knowing from the resume of it that it would just be awesome. What can I say ? This book does not disappoint! I just finished chapter five and I'm so in love with this story so far. The characters are all so endearing, the dialogues so real and the story flows at a rhythm that just transports and make you stick to it. I'm so amazed by the way you bring knowledge in your book, making it a culture nest full of references. The back stories give so much depth to the actual characters and what can I say, I loved everything.

The author's writing style is neat, easy to follow and I just couldn't find any problems with her technical writing skills. This is maybe the first book I'm reading with that much work on editing and I don't even know if it's edited yet so wow, you got it right!

If I have one small detail and advice to give to the author is to shorten her first chapter as it can be a little lengthy for readers, but that's on people's preferences!

If I have something to say to any person scaling whether to read this book or not my advice is : READ IT. Because that would just be a great heart warming one filled with love and really well written.

Good luck on the rest author, I will definitely stick around this book and finish it all to get to the other ones!

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LITERALLY HOW TO INKITT

For all the newbies out there who just reached inkitt or discovered it or knew about it, this is the book for you!

This book explains plenty of things about how it works, how you can use the platform at your advantage but also about how you can combine it with other ones if anything. Just ask! The author is so nice and does a wonderful job so you should look at this book for insightful tips and all her other ones for pure fun and distraction because this girl out there have amazing stories too! I’m so happy that I discovered this book the night it was submitted and to be the first review here! I’m just so grateful for the time she puts in helping others so this is why I’m out here ranting!!!
Check this out whenever you can and leave the author some of your questions to furnish this book some more and also some big love 💜💜

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The artist and the biker

So where do I start? The story hooked me almost instantly at the first chapter for a good reason : the author knows suspense and plays with it rather well, making the reader wait for more after each chap because they always end up with huge cliffhangers. I really enjoyed the writing style, it was pretty fluid overall, even if sometimes the characters thoughts could drag on. Still, despite it there is no time for boringness in this book, each chapter brings with him a new possibilities and suppress others and I love it. It started off with me thinking it was a remake of a high school story but there is way too much untold things and secrets for me to think like that anymore. I’m caught waiting for the next chapter just to unravel new secrets and discover more of the characters’ life. There is a past that’s pretty persistant to each of them and also depth. The characters’ dynamic is amazing, I love Destiny and Al and hate Val with all my heart, that’s how much the author hooks you in! I felt like I was leaving through Amber’s shit and her feelings were mine. Good job to the author, I’m really excited about this story and I can’t wait for more, the plot is amazing and seems so well worked on that I can already tell it’s going to be an amazing book!

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Gripping

I’m so surprised by this story and I don’t even know if it’s finished yet but I wish it could continue some more. I have never been an horror fan, more of a fantasy or action book reader but I think you just made my attention revert to another genre. Your descriptions were vivid and gripping, the trail of thoughts and actions were just perfectly connected to each other which made this story feel even more real. The background story of Claire made the story even more profound than just an horror book, making me both seek for her survival and want to get to know more of her.

I just feel like this is one of the short stories I would enjoy listening to during and around a camp fire and still feel the anxiety of what could be the end despite knowing it. You have made an incredible work, perfectly net writing style, no grammatical problems detected for me and I’m more than happy to give it a 5 stars for every rated category. Really, reading this story made me say to myself : WHAT A PLEASURE!!!!

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A very good start

I came here with great expectations seeing how you like to be abruptly honest like you said and I can’t say I’m deceived.
Your book is a really good one, with a really fluid narrative, good descriptions, great characters dynamic for starts and lots of potential overall. I have never seen such a concept before and at first I thought I was going to read a remake of an Harry Potter book but girl, you took your wand out of the sorting hat and made this story one full of possibilities. Good luck to you, the cover might need a change and there are few grammatical mistakes but other than that, you go and I’m really excited for you and for this new book that you are bringing out, hope you will stick to it and enjoy writing it from the first to the last line 💜

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AN INCREDIBLE BOOK

I can’t even begin to describe what I feel about this book, it just doesn’t look like any other I have read before in the fantasy werewolf genre. The author made such an amazing work and the plot was so impressive and unexpected that I’m just here at loss of words. The narrative was fluid, easy to read and follow and made it really enjoyable to carry on reading with always so much avidity to just reach for more details! I didn’t find any grammatical problems and the writing style was really good. More than all, the characters’ relationship is one in a kind, the bond and the way it’s portrayed is just unique, sweet at times and devastating at others.

I recommend it to anyone who is in search for something that will change their perspective and their pre-fabricated ideas about relationships, love and the usual story line in werewolf books ! Huge thanks to the author for sharing such an amazing work 💜💜

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SO GOOD

I’m actually so in love with your book and the plot, had to go read the reste on Wattpad. Keep it up, you got me hooked!

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