Wow
More of a plot than I thought I am completely shocked I have so many thoughts going on in my head about what could happen next and why all happened in the first place. In my mind I feel like there was a chemical being released throughout the Mansion forcing the prisoners inside to constantly be extremely aroused thus making them procreate so that way the government can have the perfect genetically modified specimens! As I was telling my friend about this story I'm sitting here thinking it all makes sense now the Masters are truly prisoners that's making them have no control over their life the only thing they can control are there subs which is why they are so rough on them!I feel like there should be a second to the story there could be so much more leading into an actual intense action story! Like what if Lucy really isn't dead and she wakes up and they're all on the run meanwhile also slowly dying because they're away from the mansion there is beginning to get more lifeless and lighter blue the further and further away they get! This could be intense I really encourage you to keep writing this!
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