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꧁ℑ 𝔱𝔯𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔫𝔢𝔵𝔱 𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔭𝔱𝔢𝔯 𝔟𝔢𝔠𝔞𝔶𝔰𝔢 𝔦𝔪 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔞𝔲𝔱𝔥𝔬𝔯꧂ ➪ 𝑰 𝒅𝒐 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒅𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒓𝒆𝒒𝒖𝒆𝒔𝒕𝒔! ☾︎O̶p̶e̶n̶ f̶o̶r̶ n̶e̶w̶ f̶r̶i̶e̶n̶d̶s̶☽︎

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5 Favours

Overall I enjoy the book, the prologue is what got me the most. I seek a lot in a persons writing, my most favorite is when you can feel the emotions and I definitely felt something. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing that can't be edited and fixed!

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In love!!

Who doesn't love a good mystery once in awhile? Because I sure do, wow this was something I've read a couple chapters but I can already see it's potential. The prologue=EVERYTHING❤, I love how it had this pull that made me want to continue reading. Emotions, check. I can't even put my own thoughts into words, half of my mind is still processing! I can't wait to finish💖

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Amazing!

AS a reader I really enjoyed this, it's not my usual read but it called for my attention and that's what it got. I really hope you the best and you deserve whatever success you get in the future!

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So far so good!

I really enjoy this because as a sucker for romance I look for a lot in it. The plots, twists, emotions, just everything in general. You're doing great!

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What Lies Inside

First of all let me start off with I love your cover. Me as a reader I like my chapter not too short and not too long but just right. I'm not sure hot to explain but me as a writer/author I usually write my chapters with 1000+ words for the fun of it. I think there can be more descriptions in some paragraphs but its understandable. The transitions are a little bit of a confusion and also need to be worked on but that's all for now!

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A little fix!

As I'm reading I do see a little rush which can be from the excitement of publishing because I've felt that kind of rush before myself, I think this does need a bit of a fix up but that's completely fine if you decide to do that next month, next year, or maybe never. You're the author so do what you think is best! Just don't forget development is key in order to do better!

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Saved

As a sucker for romance this is all new to me. But I really enjoyed reading, I actually read this last month but forgot to write a review because of how head over heels I was. I do like myself some mystery but only when it comes to me watching a YouTube video or Netflix lol, in this case it was different. I found myself saying "one more chapter", but still kept going anyway. I wish you the best of luck and all of my love <3

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Behind The Veil

Very interesting, I found myself reading chapter after chapter while in my head the same sentence kept repeating, "One more chapter just one more". There are a few grammar errors but nothing that can't be fixed. I can't wait to finish reading!

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Amazing!

I absolutely adore you, wow I fell in love instantly that I can't even describe it. I have so many scenarios running through my mind and none of them are to disappoint! Everything just falls in place and makes it so much better. Again I adore you!!

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Spirit of Fire

I love the way everything is put into details and how you take control into your writing. I do see some grammar issues but who doesn't make a mistake once or twice? I love how each character has a mind of their own, I'm not one to read fantasy but I found myself enjoying this. I really do see some potential in this story, I wish you the best!

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amazing!

I love your style and the way you express everything, this isn't my usual scene in reading but my this really took me somewhere. I wish you the best in the future and I do hope you get the recognition for your writing because you deserve it all <3

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Shocking

Wow amazing. Definitely recommend!

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In lovee

This was definitely a roller coaster of emotions! I’m glad that they looked past their mistakes and made up. I felt my heart clench everytime they argued honestly lmao, I definitely recommend this to any new readers!

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My favorite!

This is one of my many favorite books and may be my number 1 actually. Like omfg wow I've read this twice and I still somehow feel so many emotions and butterflies in my stomach. Amazing! I just love everything about it honestly wow. I definitely recommend this for people who are suckers for love and helpless romance because my gosh was this one crazy romance!

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Lovee!

Love Love Loveeee. Ugh this story made me feel so single! I might need to find myself a hot teacher👀. I recommend others to read this will make you feel so much in so little time! This was my first time reading a teacher and student story and I absolutely enjoyed the time I had reading! Can't wait to read the sequel.

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Five Words

Amazing. Heartfelt. Meaningful. This book carries so many emotions a person can go through. I've never felt a character on a deeper level than I have with Cher. I love how she fights for what she stands by even though sometimes she may be too stubborn to do so. Ace makes me realize many other people have things they go through and keep it bottled up. Five words is honestly very inspiring for it's readers and future readers. I really am excited to read it's sequel. The ending really got to me I felt so stupid crying lol but I realized that if I'm crying this must be a good damn book right? I loved the whole thing, how they built a relationship to how it ended. It was an emotional rollercoaster one that makes the readers want more. I wish you the best! Oh and I definitely recommend others to read. You definitely won't be disappointed.

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