

Really descriptive ( I love it!)
The author has a lot of imagery which they express in excellence throughout their chapters! The writing style is very sophisticated and speaks a lot about the character! I really like this story and I can't wait to see what the author will do in the future!
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So far i really like the story! Try to space out the paragraphs so the readers dont get confused and try to use more intriguing grammar! Other than that i really think this story is awesome so keep up the good work cant wait to see more!
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