a_sweet_present

Another writer wanting all her dreams to come true...

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Arrogance at its bestttt

First, the story is amazing because it actually matches the title. I love arrangance and like how stef is truly a girl with attitude and not just innocence (I was tired of innocent members too much.) She has a mind of her own which I enjoy knowing. The plot is great and I would like to read more and more. I'd say you need to work on the grammar part a bit more as I really see this as a potential novel which can really get the title of best novel.

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Amazed

I admire how the writer wrote this whole plot, the clearance of plot was really amazing.
I mostly don't read short stories but the excerpt attracted me and that's why I chose to read this one.
The plot is cool, smooth and understandable. The revenge showcased and perfectly executed.
I am amazed. Do write more like this one, please.

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Interesting!!!!!!

I surely am in love with the novel and if you are reading reviews to make sure if you can read it or not, then just dive in the book because it's the best.
It's amazing really for the plotline and everything. The emotions needs to be conveyed a bit more and the freakyness can be showed in some small but exclamationary sentences or words.
Plotline is amazing makes me want to read again and again.
Amazing work you did there dear author.

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Sizzling

I found the prologue so nice that I just couldn't stop before reading it completely and believe me when I say it was worth every second i spent. The characters are mouthwatering and all I can say is this is one of the best read I did.

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Great one.

It was a great book overall: I enjoyed imagining the book, for once it wasn't the typically normal one but rather a great fantasy to imagine and read. It was actually a very important thing for me to imagine everything I read and that's what I found here. Grammatical mistakes are there and the writer should try to focus on not having them. Overall it's a great plot with nice explanation of characters and ongoing points.

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Newest ever read

First if all, it's rare and new which made its quality more important and the author really did justice to the quality. You made it worth reading making everything super amazing. When I read something, I surely comment and suggest, so my suggestion here would be on grammatical mistakes, do try to proofread.
I loved the part where emotions were flowing out of the book where I was able to relate where I found the flaws so disturbing yet beautiful.
I loved the characters.
Keep it up.

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Imagination and plot

While I love reading, another interesting part of reading is imagining and I am awestruck by how I feel like I am a part of the book. It's entirely different yet I found the book so beautiful and familiar that I was loving every part of it. Do keep it up, some parts are a bit too long but I guess the author will himself manage how he can make us love his book more and more.

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Plot

while reading i still haven't got much to say since it is only one chapter but i would love to read ahead and know more about the book but i like it and is gonna be a loyal reader to this book. promise!!!

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amazing plot

till now i have loved everything about the story, be it zay's cuteness and fiesty nature or trevor's arrogancy. i still dont understand somethings but i am sure with time and more chapters i will. elaboration of things is still required though but evrything else is amazing...

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exquisite

this story is my favourite because of the character displayed are awesome and inspiring. somewhere i was able to connect with the characters and that made my heart so happy. i wait for this story's every upcoming part. the romance doesn't make me awkward i find the romance and story line amazing. keep up the good work.

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Refreshing

I like this story and the way it makes me feel. Loved this and please update more frequently.

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Pace

I liked how the pace is maintained and whole concept is great would love to read more, please update soon...

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