Aaliyah

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Read on another platform

I’m not sure why not all the chapters are here and everything seems out of place but I read this on W*ttp*d. So if you want to read the full thing it’s still on there under the same name! I loved it years ago and seen it on here to so I decided to reread but it’s not finished the author also has many more books on the other platform!

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Great book!

The story is wonderful! The dynamic between everyone and their feelings I love that. My only concern is the constant repetition throughout the book. I would say so far “Bring on the New Year,” to the end of the story is not so repetitive. Also a lot of filler sentences in those beginning chapters.

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Loved!

I loved the back-and-forth POV. You gave us all the details about each character, and even though I had questions about certain parts, they were answered very clearly when reading the next chapter or two. Very different kind of story since the guy is a drunk, but I’m glad I decided to read.

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