A. A. Wright

Freedom Or The Crown

So far I am really enjoying this, though I have not finished, I think you provided a lot of material to work with throughout your chapters. I was a bit wary of reading another story that involved those in power, the struggle for the thrown, and the constant debate on freedom or responsibility. However, I believe you did a nice job tackling this type of storyline, and it certainly fits well in your writing style. I also think the dialogue within the story comes off more naturally than most people tend to take it when considering a fantasy thrown novel, and there is quite a lot of dialogue within this story. There are a few run-on sentences, grammar issues, and questionable ways some of the sentences are structured. The blurb also has a few grammar and typo mistakes. But, I do think you were able to expand on the universe and maintain a stable world as you continued writing. I look forward to reading more!

Female Driven Mystery

I was not sure what to expect when I first started reading but I went in with an open mind. This, I think, really helped me to accept everything that the plot and storytelling have to offer. There are some portions that felt a bit heavy on information, rather than spreading out the logistics of the world through more "natural" means with each chapter. However, the author does an excellent job of keeping the reader on track. Each chapter seems to reveal new information while alluding to even more. The tense in this story is written in is also very interesting. If you'd love something to poke, prod, and wrap your head around - This book is for you!

A Hero's Journey

This book follows the hero's journey of Asvett as he tries to rescue his wife. I enjoyed the premise of this story, as it focuses on human beings and their relationship with higher entities. With the male being the "weak" human and Pekota being the all-powerful goddess. The story puts you straight into the world and as the chapters progress, the author continues to reveal more about the world. With that being said, I wish the first chapter or two was before Pekota is taken, not after, to show how they genuinely love each other. I wish we could have seen her get kidnapped rather than being told second-hand. Additionally, as with all stories, there are some grammar mistakes and exciting choices for descriptive words.

A Unique Story I Wasn't Expecting

A Unique Story I Wasn't Expecting

I wasn't sure about where this story would go when I read the summary. However, I absolutely loved the creativity behind the plot. It brings together multiple fantasy and action elements into a world that suits it. I also enjoyed the shift from reading rather fluffy and overly descriptive material to this narrated story told by Toby. With that being said, a lot of this wonder and fascination can be taken out by the grammar, punctuation, and formatting. I would have loved to read the story without faltering, but a lot of mistakes brought me out of the moment. This is a shame as the action scenes were very nicely written.

The author definitely has a creative mind and a talent for action scenes.

A Rich Romance That is Beautifully Written!

I have been really enjoying my time reading this story. It's a bit hard finding gems on this site. Not to say that other stories are necessarily bad, but this story is among the better. The author has very clear understanding for developing characters, scenes, and dialogue. I did not find myself cringing at any of the scenes, which can unfortunately happen with serious romance novels, but the author did a wonderful job keeping the text tasteful. The story moves along well, albeit the timeline can be a bit confusing. There has been clear time and effort put into this story and making it feel real for the reader.

I enjoyed the author's writing style, however, there is always room for improvement with grammar and punctuation. This is a rather easy fix and will only improve with more eyes on the text. I am very excited to continue reading to the end!