A. A. Wright

Hello, I am A. A. Wright. Please feel free to leave me feedback on any works I post. I enjoy writing, but I enjoy learning and improving even more. It's free real estate.

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Freedom Or The Crown

So far I am really enjoying this, though I have not finished, I think you provided a lot of material to work with throughout your chapters. I was a bit wary of reading another story that involved those in power, the struggle for the thrown, and the constant debate on freedom or responsibility. However, I believe you did a nice job tackling this type of storyline, and it certainly fits well in your writing style. I also think the dialogue within the story comes off more naturally than most people tend to take it when considering a fantasy thrown novel, and there is quite a lot of dialogue within this story. There are a few run-on sentences, grammar issues, and questionable ways some of the sentences are structured. The blurb also has a few grammar and typo mistakes. But, I do think you were able to expand on the universe and maintain a stable world as you continued writing. I look forward to reading more!

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Female Driven Mystery

I was not sure what to expect when I first started reading but I went in with an open mind. This, I think, really helped me to accept everything that the plot and storytelling have to offer. There are some portions that felt a bit heavy on information, rather than spreading out the logistics of the world through more "natural" means with each chapter. However, the author does an excellent job of keeping the reader on track. Each chapter seems to reveal new information while alluding to even more. The tense in this story is written in is also very interesting. If you'd love something to poke, prod, and wrap your head around - This book is for you!

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A Unique Story I Wasn't Expecting

A Unique Story I Wasn't Expecting

I wasn't sure about where this story would go when I read the summary. However, I absolutely loved the creativity behind the plot. It brings together multiple fantasy and action elements into a world that suits it. I also enjoyed the shift from reading rather fluffy and overly descriptive material to this narrated story told by Toby. With that being said, a lot of this wonder and fascination can be taken out by the grammar, punctuation, and formatting. I would have loved to read the story without faltering, but a lot of mistakes brought me out of the moment. This is a shame as the action scenes were very nicely written.

The author definitely has a creative mind and a talent for action scenes.

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