Review of Green Grass Fox
The Green Grass Fox is an interesting and well-written (aside from the odd spelling error, but this can be ironed out easily) fantasy tale in the style of Tolkien and Vance, and its plot has touches of Eragon.
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By placing female characters at the front and centre stages, and utilising a druid-like circle as the fantasy focus, dwolfe24 definitely makes sure that the novel is cliche-free, and the plot, whilst not the most original (this is becoming more difficult in non-comedic fantasy novels, though, which is why this genre is not selling as well as it used to amongst adults) definitely engages the reader in the Green Grass Fox's quest and development.
One final quibble I have: novels shouldn't generally start with "A long time ago..." or any similar sounding line.