Face paced, and leaves you wishing for more.
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Your story was gripping, a real 'scroller' (since page-turner is not applicable here!). The plot is direct and keeps you eager as you travel with the character, and you master jumping between characters' point of view, but the pace is very fast and the chapters feel sparse. Unless you meant for this to be a short story (?), it left me wishing you had fleshed it out more. I wanted for a bit more plot/subplot, character, and setting development, for example: the prince being an ally, not "evil," like his father, or Selene's memories of the Fae kingdom. Overall, I think you have a strong, clear voice and great ideas, and I hope to see more from you! I hope this con-crit was helpful and I would love to hear your feedback on my chapters :)
Cheers - Adrian