The Last Surviving Fairy Princess
It was a great story, fast-paced, easy to follow and exciting. The writing was well-done and perfect for a young audience. It had strong dialogue to endear the reader to the characters and daring action in every chapter. More dialogue may flush out the characters more in personality and also relay their motivations and back stories in their own words. When done, those interactions made the story more compelling and making the reader care what happens to them. Also, more descriptions of the characters themselves would help give more a visual of the characters we are following along on the adventure to save the magical realm.
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Well, done overall with a tease for the next story! A thoroughly enjoyable read.