M.S GASTON

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Intriguing

I was shock when i saw the title, in a good way. it's intriguing in the sense that you will ask yourself what more will happen, how will the story revolves, and so many more. The story has a potential, just stay on track and dont fall on cliche parts.

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Highly recommended

Well, first...I am so shocked when i saw your story has a small review because on my perspective, you I mean your story deserves lot more than that.

Writing style: You are not just creating scenes in your story, wanna know what you're creating? you are creating a world. I love everything, very crisp and vivid. Everything falls in place.

Charisma on readers: I'm not really into scifi books or stories but you got me going. The curiosity can't stop flowing in my mind on what will happen next.

Plot: RICH AND THRILLING
A world that never exist will exist as I'm reading further.

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Bite

Your story has a bite that keeps me scrolling down. I also love Emma's character she's funny. I believe readers would be inlove with this type of character.

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Captivating

I love how you combine every element in your story. The plot is interesting. I read three chapters already and it makes me going.

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Narration

I love the narration and how it builds the setting. Good plot to grasp with.

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Interesting story

The story is ineteresting. It has a potential to be published. I just hope that chapters have titles so you can look ahead. Overall its a good book to be.

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Perfect curiousity

The story posseses a perfect curiousity that will make you to read more :)

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Relatable

The story is relatable for everyone. It is a strenght of yours to let the reader's feel the

right emotions you build up in a scene. It has a potential, so keep the good work.

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Clean

Everything is in place. Im so impressed. It is so clean. The thoughts run so smoothly. Great job :)

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Keep moving

I like the start. Keep moving.

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Wonderful start

Great start.

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strong opening

i love the strong opening if your story. it builds the atmosphere well.

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