A. Dee

Los Angeles

Author of dark fiction and unconventional romance novels.

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Sunol Drive

Jane is an aspiring fashion designer who manages a store in the lower end of Los Angeles. Her life is mundane and routine until she meets Israel, a bad boy type who lives in the neighborhood she wo...

Drama / Romance by A. Dee • Ongoing • 54 chapters

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Dark Liquid Blue

Audrey finds an escape from her dysfunctional family life when she goes to stay with Lucien, a friend she's known for a brief amount of time. Audrey feels herself falling in love with Lucien, but h...

Drama / Romance by A. Dee • Complete • 50 chapters

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Dance For Me

Martial artist Dominic and his mysterious, soft spoken neighbor Hope begin an ill-fated relationship. When Dominic's wild card girlfriend Tristan gets wind of the affair, she devises a series of pl...

Drama / Romance by A. Dee • Complete • 60 chapters

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She's A Liquid by Ever
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Beautiful written

Beautifully written.. love this

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Mad obsession by shiroshididdy
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It's a little difficult to determine who is speaking at times because there are no quotation marks in the dialogue. Also the characters have no names yet? I'm curious about what she (the MC) has to say to her (I'm assuming) boyfriend or S.O?
I'm not sure what this is about but you have an interesting story here and I would like to read more.

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Idol to No One by Rising_D3stiny
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So far

There are parentheses in the dialogue that don't belong there and make the text appear garbled. I like your use of description. Over all this just needs a good edit. Keep up the good work.

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