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No Words To Fully Describe

This book was absolutely phenomenal. Not once was I ever disinterested or found a reason to dislike this book. The character development is beyond amazing, the author did such a perfect job on each individual character. You feel for each and every one of them. This book has taken me through many feelings of happiness to complete sadness. I cried during a couple of the chapters in this book, I cannot begin to even express it. The plot and story hooks you in and is like an addiction; once you start to read it, you can't stop. I'm sad it's over really! I would love for there to be maybe a second part based on their son at the end maybe grown up? Just an idea, I absolutely love this story and I can't begin to describe it. 10/10, this has to be my favorite book that I have ever read in complete honesty. Hands down, absolutely phenomenal.

~Ali

I Saw Her in the Mirror

The story had a good plot and overall was a pretty good story. However, there were quite a few grammar mistakes, but that wasn't too big of a deal. Another thing is that I felt like the plot was going too fast, I think if you would've stretched it some then it would've been better (I like the story, just could've been longer). Also, there were times where I got confused about what was happening, but that wasn't too big of deal either. As a whole. the story was good and was an interesting read.

-A.A

Wow

The plot of this story is very good. The story is captivating and it's one that when you've reached the end, it's a sad feeling because you want more of it. The characters have their own unique personalities and you put so much detail that you start to feel for the characters. I love that it has action, mystery, and a little bit of romance thrown in, The emotion is really good and I feel that when you finish the story completely, it'll definitely be one to remember. Overall, fantastic story and I am really hyped up to find out what happens next. Keep up the good writing! :)

-A.A

Beautiful Pain

Many people here about stories with heart break, and they don't actually know that feeling. When you love someone with all of your heart, and would give anything in the world just to see them for a moment. Then they break you apart, and every little thing reminds you of the pain. The betrayal. The loss. This story was a great symbolism of the love and hurt someone can go through over one person. How much one little thing and destroy someone entirely. I love this, and I hope that Winter Rose gets over this. I believe she can. -A.A

Beautiful!

This story was beautiful! I love reading BL stories like these, but this was perfect. It had the right amount of components in it and was phenomenal. There were some errors here and there grammatically, but nothing that was story altering. I loved it, the story definitely had me hooked!

Speechless

When I read Schizophrenia before it was revised, I was IN LOVE with it. I also read the revised version, and absolutely loved that too. I would constantly talk about it and be thinking of it. When I saw Insomnia come out, I was FREAKING OUT! I was so excited. I've been along on the journey of the author writing this, and I have to say, this book and series itself is my favorite. Favorite out of very popular books (like Harry Potter and that stuff). I absolutely am in love with this book and series, and it has never let me down once. The character dynamics are phenomenal, and the author NEEDS an award for this book INSTANTLY! I truly love this series, and this will definitely a book I'll be talking about, and will be going back on and reading. I love this so much!!! LOVE IT!!!! I praise the author so much. Thank you for writing this! Thank you, from the bottom of my heart!

I loved this

This book of poems is filled with such emotion people can relate to, but only in a certain way. We all feel some way, not all good, not all bad. This book of poems shows the sadness and complex thoughts that run through one's mind, sometimes it's so out of control and deep we do things that we can't take back. All for a reason. I loved this poem book, it was so emotional and amazing all and all! Kudos to the author! :3

Dark and Beautiful

I like the darkness about it, making a twisted horror story in a rhythmic way. I love this! Dark and beautiful, telling a tale in a rhyme, for how could such beauty become a crime?

Great poetry! <3

-Ali

Schizophrenia

This book is truly amazing! I read this a few months ago before this was edited, and I binged it because I couldn't get enough of it. I reread it when you were editing it, and I was even more captivated. The ending was more or less the same, but I still loved it with all of my heart. This book has the thrill that people look for in a horror book, but also gives you that twisted and dark aspect of the psychological part which is my favorite type of horror. There are many parts in this where I felt so sad for Ryder, and I still very much do feel sad for her. This was so amazing and you are very talented! This is something I 100% will (and have) recommend to other people. This is too good!! Thank you so much for making this! Truly!

The Suicide Club

This is the kind of stories I like. One's with dark plots and the idea makes you look at the world differently when you're finished reading it. I really want to know what happens to the characters. The only thing I say to do is fix the couple grammar mistakes here and there (but that's okay, it's ongoing so those things can be fixed easily), and add more emphasis to the characters. The only character that you really know how they are is Cameron, and Victor you also know how he is, but at the same time you don't really know why. A suggestion I can offer is to go into the character's backstories, and tell why the way they are. Give the characters a little personality. Other than that, I really love this story and can't wait to find out more. Plot is amazing! Keep up the good work and I'll definitely keep an eye out for new chapters that come out.

Note: The suggestions I gave are just suggestions. If you don't want to heed them, it's okay! I'll still read the story anyway because it's good! :)

Hope you have a grand day! -A.A

Adventurous and Creepy

The story has a pretty creepy vibe to it which makes the horror part definitely come to life, and I like the adventurous part about it. The characters are unique and the names, places, and history based on the time taken place is both amazing and accurate. The plot it very complex and in depth which makes it both intriguing and terrifying at the same time. I love the detail put into this book and I can't wait to figure out what happens at the end! :D

-Ali