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'Her Last Words' - Courtney Parker '

In a world full of mistakes, there is always a success. In a world full of sorrow, there's always hope. In a world full of broken souls. there's always one put together.

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Amazingly Tragic

This was amazing, and the author did a wonderful job portraying the tragedy of what happened to the main character (Cathy), while also giving a romantic, sweet love story, but also throwing in more tragedy when she is ripped of him. I love this so much, and I thank the author so very much for creating such a great book, and this is definitely something I will recommend!

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Good read

This is definitely a good read if you're into short stories with a decent plot. the grammar was very good, however I think there are things you could have fixed. Such as the huge gap in chapter 4. and you could've made the chapters longer. I like your writing style though, and I think if you put a little more effort on another book if you don't want to do it with this series, then I'm 100% sure it'll be a masterpiece. This is pretty good though, so don't get discouraged.

I hope this helps, rather than you taking it offensively.......I really just want to help you.

Anyway, good story, small fixes could make it better.

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I Saw Her in the Mirror

The story had a good plot and overall was a pretty good story. However, there were quite a few grammar mistakes, but that wasn't too big of a deal. Another thing is that I felt like the plot was going too fast, I think if you would've stretched it some then it would've been better (I like the story, just could've been longer). Also, there were times where I got confused about what was happening, but that wasn't too big of deal either. As a whole. the story was good and was an interesting read.

-A.A

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Wow

The plot of this story is very good. The story is captivating and it's one that when you've reached the end, it's a sad feeling because you want more of it. The characters have their own unique personalities and you put so much detail that you start to feel for the characters. I love that it has action, mystery, and a little bit of romance thrown in, The emotion is really good and I feel that when you finish the story completely, it'll definitely be one to remember. Overall, fantastic story and I am really hyped up to find out what happens next. Keep up the good writing! :)

-A.A

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Beautiful Pain

Many people here about stories with heart break, and they don't actually know that feeling. When you love someone with all of your heart, and would give anything in the world just to see them for a moment. Then they break you apart, and every little thing reminds you of the pain. The betrayal. The loss. This story was a great symbolism of the love and hurt someone can go through over one person. How much one little thing and destroy someone entirely. I love this, and I hope that Winter Rose gets over this. I believe she can. -A.A

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I loved this

This book of poems is filled with such emotion people can relate to, but only in a certain way. We all feel some way, not all good, not all bad. This book of poems shows the sadness and complex thoughts that run through one's mind, sometimes it's so out of control and deep we do things that we can't take back. All for a reason. I loved this poem book, it was so emotional and amazing all and all! Kudos to the author! :3

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Dark and Beautiful

I like the darkness about it, making a twisted horror story in a rhythmic way. I love this! Dark and beautiful, telling a tale in a rhyme, for how could such beauty become a crime?

Great poetry! <3

-Ali

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The Umbrella Girl

This story is pretty interesting. It has a mixture a romance, mystery, and cuteness all combined making a sweet mixture. There's quite a bit of grammar mistakes here and there, but overall I think this story has some great potential. Keep up the good writing!

-A.A

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Schizophrenia

This book is truly amazing! I read this a few months ago before this was edited, and I binged it because I couldn't get enough of it. I reread it when you were editing it, and I was even more captivated. The ending was more or less the same, but I still loved it with all of my heart. This book has the thrill that people look for in a horror book, but also gives you that twisted and dark aspect of the psychological part which is my favorite type of horror. There are many parts in this where I felt so sad for Ryder, and I still very much do feel sad for her. This was so amazing and you are very talented! This is something I 100% will (and have) recommend to other people. This is too good!! Thank you so much for making this! Truly!

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The Suicide Club

This is the kind of stories I like. One's with dark plots and the idea makes you look at the world differently when you're finished reading it. I really want to know what happens to the characters. The only thing I say to do is fix the couple grammar mistakes here and there (but that's okay, it's ongoing so those things can be fixed easily), and add more emphasis to the characters. The only character that you really know how they are is Cameron, and Victor you also know how he is, but at the same time you don't really know why. A suggestion I can offer is to go into the character's backstories, and tell why the way they are. Give the characters a little personality. Other than that, I really love this story and can't wait to find out more. Plot is amazing! Keep up the good work and I'll definitely keep an eye out for new chapters that come out.

Note: The suggestions I gave are just suggestions. If you don't want to heed them, it's okay! I'll still read the story anyway because it's good! :)

Hope you have a grand day! -A.A

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Cute and Sweet

I really liked the plot of this, and it was interesting and captivating. I definitely think you could've continued this on as not just a short story, but have it be a romance novel. I say fix the few grammar mistakes and you're golden! Awesome story! <3

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Sweet

This story was very sweet, and the more you read through it, the more your heart melts. This is filled with lots of emotion and I find it very sweet. Great story! <3

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Adventurous and Creepy

The story has a pretty creepy vibe to it which makes the horror part definitely come to life, and I like the adventurous part about it. The characters are unique and the names, places, and history based on the time taken place is both amazing and accurate. The plot it very complex and in depth which makes it both intriguing and terrifying at the same time. I love the detail put into this book and I can't wait to figure out what happens at the end! :D

-Ali

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